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Plot |
1.
Does the story
have recognizable structure i.e. point of action, complications, climax,
falling action and resolution
2.
Is the first
chapter really interesting and start with an action
3.
Does each scene
have a goal, conflict, action and disaster.
4.
Do the sequels
start with a reaction and end in a decision for the dilemma which will in
turn lead to some kind of action.
5.
Do the scenes
move fast enough with less description, back story and shorter sentences.
6.
Are the sequels
just long enough and not too long. If you’re tempted to skim, they probably
are.
7.
Do the subplots
tie in seamlessly with the plot and do they follow the basic plot structure.
8.
For each scene
is the POV and VP character clear.
9.
Is the theme
coming through naturally and not contrived.
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Characters |
1.
Are your
characters unique or can you find them somewhere if you can think hard
enough. Give them unique histories, unique personalities and personalized
quirks.
2.
Are all main
characters well developed and are they acting true to their intended nature
3.
Is the main
character sympathetic to the reader and is he someone you and the reader can
understand and relate to
4.
Does the main
character have a compelling enough goal that failure to meet would lead to
some kind of tragic loss
5.
Does the main
character change into a better, worse or a more mature person by the end of
the story
6.
Pay close
attention to what the characters are seeing and feeling.
7.
Make sure of
the appearance and disappearance of characters. Make it logical.
8.
Make sure that
characters still look and act the same way.
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Setting |
1.
Is it spread in
sprinklings all through the story or is it overloaded in one place.
2.
Is the
description done by showing the characters experience of it rather than just
telling us what everything looks like.
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Dialogue |
1.
If it doesn’t
drive the plot forward, provide information about the characters or show the
relationship between characters – kill it. Don’t write in complete
grammatical sentences.
2.
Is it
believable
3.
Get rid of most
of the chitchat and social niceties
4.
Instead of
using dialogue tags instead just start the action immediately.
5.
Start a new
line even if one character doesn’t talk
6.
Freeze the
conversation with a few sentences of prose
7.
Ellipses show
the characters trailing off and dashes to show the characters being cut off
by another
8.
For each
conversation you provide, each character must have his/her voice. Don’t use
difficult words for a farm boy.
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Description |
1.
Replace
abstract nouns like she was happy with an action like she smiled.
2.
Is it vivid and
vibrant
3.
It must be
balanced with dialogue and narration
4.
Do all scenes
use all the five senses.
5.
In any
particular paragraph not more than three senses should be used otherwise
you’re just overdoing it.
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Writing Style |
1.
Delete
adjectives
2.
Replace adverbs
with stronger verbs like spoke quietly with whispered
3.
Delete weak
qualifiers like really, very, rather, little, somewhat, extremely, quite.
4.
For overused
words check for synonyms. You can use the find feature to check for overused
words and phrases.
5.
Replace
Negatives i.e. Mary didn’t like Tom instead use a positive like Mary hated
Tom, Overused words with synonyms and Abstract words like happy, angry with
actions that display the emotion
6.
Replace passive
voices like she was eaten to active voice like the shark ate her.
7.
Delete clichés
8.
Check if you
have the same reactions for different characters when experiencing the same
emotion. Both Lila and Cameron should not run their hands through their hair
when they’re angry.
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Grammar |
1.
Check
punctuation
2.
Check
spellings, autocheck is not enough.
3.
Cut down over
clunky sentences by reducing their length.
4.
Make sure the
tense is the same throughout your novel.
5.
Vary sentence,
paragraph, scene and chapter lengths
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Title |
1.
You don’t have
to come up with a title immediately but its always good to have a standby
2.
Has it been
used before
3.
Is it
appropriate to the genre; imagine a horror novel titled ‘How to be happy’.
The audience you’re targeting will wonder if you went a bit nutty like your
characters.
4.
Does it attract
attention
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Formatting |
1.
Does it meet
the publisher’s demands on font, spacing, margins. If not then move on to two
2.
Font size 12
and justified text.
3.
Font color
black
4.
1 inch margins,
and double spacing between paragraphs (no extra spaces between).
5.
First line of
each paragraph indented by ½ an inch.
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Thursday, 2 August 2012
Quick Editing Checklist
The Basics of Free Writing
When
free writing;
1.
Give yourself a time limit of 30 – 60 minutes
or a minimum word count.
2.
Keep your hand moving during this whole time
limit. Do not pause to read what you’ve written.
3.
Write in a way that is most comfortable for
you. If you type faster than you write; type. If vice versa then you know what
to do.
4.
Choose an environment that is the least
distracting for you and that you know helps you concentrate. Some people love
the idea of being in a coffee shop with people milling around others just want
to be locked in a room all alone with nothing but their computer. As long as it works.
5.
Switch off your internal editor. Knock yourself
out with the spelling mistakes, bad grammar, adverbs, metaphors and clichés, no
one cares (at least not right now).
6.
Stop the research. I’ve been a culprit of this
many times i.e. using research as an excuse for writing. Believe me during your
first draft you need only the information you used in creating your synopses.
If you don’t know the Israeli name for that new flat Mossad agent just name him
Moses, highlight it with blue or underline and move on, you can sort him out
later.
7.
And for Christ sake; Stay away from facebook,
twitter, yahoo or your blog
Sample Mystery Plot Outline
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Disclose crime
(Some choose to make the crime a whole prologue from the point of view of the
victim or the perpetrator) in the most dramatic way possible.
Reveal a clue but
don’t bring attention to it
Introduce
detective
Introduce
Setting
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Start the
detective on the path to solving the crime by remembering the clue that was
notice in chapter one or introducing one. Select suspects and start out
interviewing, either obtrusively or unobtrusively. One of them should turn
out to be the criminal later on in the story.
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Introduce a
subplot that affects another part of the sleuth’s life (a new friend, an
enemy or higher in rank sleuth, a friend who kisses her complicating their
relationship, a sister who reappears).
Reveal facts
about some suspects
Find a few more
clues that may eliminate one or two suspects but brings one suspect to the
forefront
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Interview the
forefront suspect
Find a clue
that shows he/she lie or testimony from other suspects who is also now
eliminated
Make the
forefront suspect disappear, runaway or die
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5
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Everything
points to the missing suspect but the detective just feels it doesn’t feel
right plus there are some clues that are still unexplained
Provide a
climax for a subplot that distracts the sleuth from solving the crime, makes
the crime personal or demands that they stop the investigation or a crisis
with the crime itself
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Now the
investigator has a personal stake in solving the crime as a result of the
previous crisis(either threat to his life, loved one, emotional attachment).
Broaden the
investigation to put suspicion on other suspects. Start to focus your clues
towards your solution though try not to make it obvious.
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Reveal shocking
histories, unexpected characters coming to town, shocking revelations,
formerly secret relationships e.g business arrangements, affairs, hidden
kinships, and scores to settle. Clarify previous clues that had not been
understood. Missing suspect is found (either dead, in a coma or unwilling to
talk) but either way is automatically eliminated
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Interpretation
of found clues leads to a dead end and the sleuth has to review to determine
where he/she went wrong making all left suspects equally able to have
committed the crime. New clues are only complicating the mystery and not
helping in its solution i.e. throw in a twist (e.g. the food isn’t what
poisoned the victim). Resolve one of the sub – plots. Remember the clue in
chapter one that skipped us and add to what the sleuth knows so far. Sleuth
makes a conclusion which is undisclosed to the reader
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9
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The sleuth
seeks evidence to support the as yet undisclosed conclusion. Two suspects
left (you may reveal or not reveal). Sleuth finds something (perhaps it
proves that the flimsy alibi of the prime suspect is actually valid).
Criminal and the other suspect turns up where sleuth is trying to find
evidence.
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10
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Dramatic
confrontation between sleuth and criminal which the detective will win either
by the timely entrance of his best friend who he’d called before, the cops
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Creating Scenes & Sequel Outlines
The scene and sequel is the smallest unit of a novel that
contains all the elements necessary for a story. They contain emotion, action,
dialogue, characters, conflict and setting. The scene is a physical story
action (all about doing) while the sequel is a mental story action (all about
thinking)
The scene is a reaction to a sequel while the sequel is a
reaction to the scene. Dividing your novel into scenes will help you out when it
comes to revising your novel because editing, cutting up and rearranging your
novel will be that much easier. The scenes and sequels are meant to advance the
plot and develop the characters.
Only the most critical characters appear in the scene and in
each the setting is well developed so that at that particular moment the reader
is in that place with the POV character. The POV character is the person who is
going to be doing the acting or taking part in it. Do not clog a scene with a
lot of backstory or flashbacks because it will slow down the pace of the story.
Save it for the sequel.
The scene requires full Technicolor details and moment to
moment progression so that the reader feels like what is happening is happening
in real time or ‘live’. It should never be about telling, no gossip sessions
here please. Scenes in the plot have four basic parts.
a)
What does the POV character want at the beginning of the scene.
b)
Create an obstacle/conflict that prevents them from reaching their goal
c)
Does the POV character reach their goal or not
d)
Get the goal or not get the goal – either way
there’s a catch. Disaster strikes causing
an unexpected and larger problem for the character
The scene will immediately be followed by a sequel. The
sequel allows the reader and the POV character to collect himself and to deal
with the disaster from the scene. Its purpose is to change a disaster into a
goal. It creates a transition from the frantic feelings of action to the calm
aspects of having made a decision. Here you can drop in some back-story to
explain the character traits we saw shown in the scenes.
Though critical, the sequels are shorter than the scenes in
genres that require a faster pace such as a thriller. It may even appear just
at the beginning of a scene. In romance novels the sequels are much longer than
the scenes. This is because the pace of a sequel is much slower and has a high
amount of introspection. There are three basic parts of a sequel.
a)
The POV reaction to the disaster. Is he angry,
shocked, happy or sad? This allows the reader to tap into the emotions of the
scene. The character takes the time to regroup. Its all about sheer emotion.
b)
The POV character begins to worry over how they
can solve the disaster because they cannot remain in this status quo. The
character begins to go over his/her options though technically he/she has no
good choices as they all have side effects. This stage is characterized by thoughts.
c)
A decision
is made of how to deal with the issue at hand and immediately another scene is
launched.
Scene
– sequel – scene – sequel… the pattern goes till at the climax the worst
disaster is dealt with and there are no more disaster. The story ends. Writing
in scenes and sequels makes sure that you write action/reaction scenes that
move at a better pace and are rational to the reader.
Not
every scene needs a sequel though. If the character does not need to make a
decision you don’t need a sequel. It is possible to put two scenes back to back
especially in thrillers where introspection must be limited. Take for example
in Scene 15, Ryder has just gotten rid of the faramtulas only to discover that
they were guarding a Bergonof. The Bergonof roars. Scene 16 cannot start with
Ryder thinking of ‘oh what a terrible terrible thing. This Berganof is really
scary’. No! Dude needs to start running.
Outlining Your Novel
The outline is the story plan. Outlining is the process of
setting out the events that will lead to the protagonist meeting his/her goal. Some
writers advice that you fly by the seat of your pants and pray to God that
everything falls into place. Some genres like mystery cannot work with this
kind of style because they require structuring to avoid forgetting. The more
planning you do in the beginning, the less rewriting you’ll have to do.
Once you have your character charts, you will be able to
figure out exactly what your character would do is presented with a challenge. Outlining
your book before you begin writing allows you to escape the writers block
because the moment you begin writing you already have the building blocks. With
an outline you will be able to;
a)
Know what happens next and if it makes sense so
that you’ll have no dead ends.
b)
It is a foundation for your first draft and
makes it less intimidating to start writing.
c)
Figure out any plot holes or character actions
You don’t need to develop a magnificent outline. Just a
basic list will do. Over-outlining may suck all the joy of writing and curb
spontaneity. Furthermore it becomes harder to cut scenes because you have put
so much effort into them. Some people simply outline by using a word document
with an active table of contents so that they click and they see what could
happen in the scene. Otherwise choose to use flashcards that allow them to
organize and reorganize the scenes while providing a physical connection.
View Point Character
This the person through whom the story will be told. Often
but not all the time the view point character is the protagonist. The choice of
your view point character will influence how the reader seas the story. A child
and an adult will not see a death in the family the same way. A woman and a man
will not see a case of infidelity in the same way. The VP character can be the
difference between people siding with your theme or thinking of you as preachy.
The viewpoint character has to be someone who;
a)
Has the most
to lose
b)
Is the most interesting
and the reader can relate to them. People sympathize with people who have
rounded characters and are going to grow with the story. Even the villain can
be a VP character especially if you integrate some back-story that explains to
the reader what their motives were.
c)
Is present
during the action scenes other wise what’s the point.
d)
Is involved
in the action or is doing the action. An observer won’t be as invested in a car
chase as the person who is being chased.
e)
Will be around
the plot for a lot longer than that particular scene. By giving him/her a voice
you are allowing us into the deeper recesses of the personality. There’s no
need to get so up close and personal if you’re not going to let us enjoy
him/her for sometime. The view point character must be someone who’s
actions/crisis will be resolved by the end of the story.
Single VP Character
When a writer uses a single VP character it means that there
is a consistent viewpoint throughout the story whether it is in first person or
third person narrative. Short fiction works and Children’s stories will often
feature just one viewpoint character to allow them connect with that character
completely. It is thus suitable for works with less than twelve characters and
a fairly liner plot.
Using a single VP could cause the reader to feel a little
bit claustrophobic because they are stuck in the head of one person the whole
time plus they are restricted from the motivations of the other characters.
Multiple VP
Characters
In this case the VP character switches
from scene to scene. The multiple VP is used in longer works where a Single VP
will become monotonous. It is also used to introduce danger that the main
protagonist isn’t aware of or to present a different viewpoint of the same
situation.
Despite the freedom that multiple view
points offer, resist the urge to have too many two to four characters is often
enough to move the plot of the book. An unlimited number of VP characters
decreases the intimacy between your character and the reader and thus the
emotional impact of your story.
Make sure that the scenes that the protagonist
has the floor are the most compelling and emotional ones. You don’t want the
audience rooting for the bad guy because when you were there you did such a
good job of explaining his motivations that the reader now feels like he really
should be allowed to get away with stealing the crown jewels.
Narrative Point of View
First Person POV
The story is told
in ‘I’ or ‘we’. It is an intimate POV that makes the reader feel like they
are the character’s best friend and are able to experience the characters
private, thoughts and feelings. It is particularly attractive to young
readers who get to live in the character’s mind. It has the lure of gossip.
The story is told
completely from the narrator’s point of view and anything he is not able to
see, touch, smell, taste or hear can only be introduced courtesy of
conversations with other characters. This can restrict the author’s ability
to move the story. Also if the character has a particular gender it may
restrict the kind of readers who will enjoy it because they may not be able
to identify with them.
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Second Person POV
The story is told
in ‘you’ form. The reader feels as if the narrator is speaking directly to
them or that the story is happening to them. Very few fiction writers use
this POV because of its jarring effect.
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Third Person POV
It uses ‘he’,
‘she’ and ‘they’. There are many options available for choosing the view
point character because you can choose to follow only one character or you
can switch the view point character any time. Most fiction is written in
third person and therefore it feels natural to the reader. It is much easier
to get into action when using third person POV.
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Omniscient POV
The difference
between the omniscient POV and the other POVs is that in this case the story
isn’t told through the eyes of someone but rather from up above. Like the
third person POV he/she is used. It gives the writer a chance to explore the
setting without being restricted by how the characters see it. Fairytales have long been written in this
style. The narrator may take time to delve into the feelings of the
characters but like a person who is just observing them thus allowing
objectivity.
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Falling Action
Basically
this where the knots tied during the climax are untied. The protagonist now has
to deal with effects of the confrontation with the antagonists. Camilla and
Rhett have escaped the evil dictator and blown wide his operation and rescued
their kid. Now for the reuniting phase - After building the makeshift boat they
get to dry land and Camilla has to figure out how to deal with her sister for her
betrayal. The falling action will include confessions and tying up the loose
ends.
The
falling action will often appear at the end of the story. The temptation is
usually to hasten this stage of the writing. I urge you to resist. It will only
create disappointment in the reader after you have put in so much effort into
the writing.
Climax
Recharge
over! Usually this is courtesy of
introspection or a good talk from a close friend or mentor. By the end of which
the protagonist decides he is not going down easily. The villain is going to
get the fight of his life. He she makes a plan that we’re all crossing our
fingers will succeed to crash or find the villain.
The
villain isn’t going down smiling either and has a back up plan ready when he is
confronted putting the protagonist in some kind of danger. There is a god awful
fight that could go either way. In this phase of plot structure you need to
create the kind of suspense that will push your character to the edge.
Inability to overcome this issue will lead to some sort of deep
loss. Loss of freedom, life, family, mind, fortune or even career will probably
cause a deep scar on your character. At the end, the protagonist gets to give the
knockout punch after successfully extricating himself/herself from the crisis. For
tragedies however, the climax will mean a defeat for the protagonist along with
the expected loss and return to a kind of uneasy normality for the antagonist.
The
climax will often appear at the end of the story.
Complications
These are the list the events
that temporarily keep the main character from getting to his goal or from
solving their conflict. These events may also change the nature of the conflict
and the characters goal. At this
point the protagonist begins to deal with the issues that have arisen because of
the large log you just threw across their path. It may include the log getting
bigger than they originally though it was, the log multiplying itself and
giving birth to little babies that the protagonist has to jump over to get to
their personal goal.
Good conflicts will often take the
reader by surprise because of the sudden mini crises they throw into the works.
Something will happen that the reader was not in the least bit expecting.
Creating this kind of suspense means that you’ll need to create scenes that
bring up emotions of surprise, shock, fear, anxiety or excitement. They keep
the reader on edge. You can create suspense by introducing.
a)
A ticking clock – if the heroine doesn’t do
something by a certain time life as we know it will burst into flames and make
it seem like it is uncertain that the she can beat the clock.
b)
Withhold crucial information from the
character but let the audience know it. Now let’s just wait for Jun to discover
that his boss really isn’t dead.
c)
Keep the characters emotion on high alert
(sweaty palms, racing heart …you know all those panic symptoms) as if they just
know something is going to happen. You
can do this by making the setting somehow creepy.
d)
Place the characters in a situation where they
are up to their eyeballs in trouble and just need to get out of it. Anything
they do however just keeps getting them deeper into trouble.
e)
Change the reveal into something unexpected.
The police are coming (I can hear the sirens from a distance) we know Greg is
going to be caught. There’s knocking on the door – of course it’s the police.
Open the door – surprise – Its just his mom. The stupid police confused the
neighbors house for his and arrest that unlucky guy instead.
f)
Give it an open ending i.e. the resolution
could go either way. If the police are at the door she could be arrested or
direct them to the real killer who is her son or she could just make a run for
it.
g)
Kill off one of your beloved characters –
painful but effective
There are numerous plot twists out there including an accident,
celebration interruptus, hidden relatives, someone is discovered to be evil,
discovery of a secret,
You are basically throwing stones at your character at this point.
He may miss a few or get hit by a few (but not enough to knock him off the
tree). In this phase the protagonist and the villain are getting equal winning
and losing time. The characters reaction and solution to the complications you
throw their way should match the personality you gave them.
At the end of the complications phase the mini crises and are
temporarily solved but there is an increasingly rising tension as the
complications become worse and worse. For instance Marie loses her memory as a
result of an accident, someone turns up claiming to be her lost brother, turns
out the ‘brother’ is on the run from the police, Marie is charged an accessory
to whatever crime, her ‘brother’ turns out dead and all the fingerprints point
out to her, unexplained amounts of money turn up in her account that she
deposited prior to her amnesia…I could go on and on.
The last complication is often the biggest
obstacle to the character’s goal. It is unclear whether your main character will
or will not reach their goal. Failing could be
disastrous and cause the main character’s downfall. There’s a high
likelihood that we may not make it (gasp!) but if we don’t climb this mountain
the monsters chasing behind us will eat us up. It can’t be anything that we can
easily resolve in fact even the reader is just as stumped as the protagonists. It
will usually end in a temporary fail for the protagonist – the Black Moment.
The
black moment will often force the protagonist to take some time off to
recharge.
Point of Action
Some time ago, writers would start with long bits of exposition
about the main character before they introduced the conflict. Unfortunately we
are now in the instant age. Writers these days seldom have the leisure of
waxing lyrical. Readers want their action within the first chapter. You’ll have
to use this action scene to also show some of your character’s traits.
This is the beginning of the book; it’s not the beginning of the
story. The character is perfectly safe in the status quo until something
happens that throws his/her life completely off kilter. It is the point at
which the tension begins and your character is suddenly thrust into a situation
where their goal is threatened and your story objective is introduced. The
basics are;
a)
The point of action has to immediately grab
the reader’s attention. Start the book off with some startling action; a scene
that is exciting, terrifying or shocking.
b)
Provide vivid descriptions of the setting so
that the reader is grounded somewhere.
c)
By the end of the first chapter of your book,
the reader needs to be able to identify 5 – 10 things about the main
character(s).
d)
Give the reader something to worry about.
What’s going to happen to the heroine? Will she run away from the scene that
makes her look like a murderer or will the police arrest her?
e)
You’ll probably have to interweave parts of
the back-story into the initial chapters so that your readers can understand
their motivations, fears and personality and immediately form a bond. However
do not introduce the back story in the first chapter and in the first few pages
it should be brief and tie directly to the scene.
For instance your character just wants to safely deliver their new
designs to a client. You want them to solve a murder. They can either come in
by offering themselves as amateur investigators or you can drag them into the
story kicking and screaming i.e. the body is stored in the boot of their car
next to the designs and they are the main suspect.
Conflict
A character who wants something isn't in conflict...he's a
spoilt brat. Real conflict is about need, thirst, hunger. Conflict appears when
your character believes that whatever they are searching for will return their
world as it should be. Failure to achieve their goal will have dire
consequences; the sky will come tumbling down and the earth will open. Meeting
their goal is not as easy as sitting down to have a talk about the issue or
pulling a sword from a rock and plunging it into a rock. Oh No! For one the
hero doesn't even know how to handle a sword. The sword itself is in possession
of some guy who thinks the hero is the only link to the underworld. To make
matters worse the hero has issues with change and really does not feel like
setting off for the expedition. Till his wife disappears. Gasp!
Conflict heightens the tension in the story and keeps the reader glued the story as they wait for your hero to resolve it. It can be internal (goal against personal values, weaknesses, beliefs) or external ( charcater against another character, nature, society, machines or supernatural forces). To create a viable conflict
Conflict heightens the tension in the story and keeps the reader glued the story as they wait for your hero to resolve it. It can be internal (goal against personal values, weaknesses, beliefs) or external ( charcater against another character, nature, society, machines or supernatural forces). To create a viable conflict
1. Revise
the objective you had created for your character when coming up with your LOCK conducive idea and your
- List things that could prevent your character from reaching their goals be it internal or external issues i.e. an external conflict for a detective who is trying to solve a murder is missing evidence, tainted evidence, lying witnesses, interfering family members. Internal conflict would be the fact that this murder is so much like his mother's so he is getting way too emotional about it.
- Assess your list to make sure you have a good conflict i.e. it will evoke some kind of reaction in your readers (pity, fear, shock), that it is pressing enough and the character cannot avoid dealing with it. resolving the conflict will not be easy - the character will have to expend some mental, emotional and physical energy to deal with it.
- Check to make sure that the conflict can be resolved. There is no point pitting Flesurias against an earthquake that he can't predict, prevent or protect himself from. Your hero must have reasonable opportunity to resolve the conflict but also equal probability of not resolving it.
At this stage of novel writing you will only need to create about three types of conflict but as your plot line develops you can create conflict from every decision the protagonist makes. Of course your primary conflict will depend on the genre of your novel. Romance novels will by nature require an romantic conflict, high fantasy will require conflict involving fighting and man against supernatural forces king of conflict. Sometimes you may have more than one main conflict but be prepared for a much longer and episodic novel.
Take note however that there is such a thing as 'Oh My God' overload and after a while the readers will get bored. To avoid this; The number of conflicts should not be more than what you can count on one finger. Try to vary the kind of internal conflict for your main characters. Both John and Beth shouldn't be cynical about love.
Have Fun getting your little darling into trouble
Thriller Tropes
The Villain
a)
Masterminds - This guy has too much money, too
much time, too many minions to do his evil deeds, too many women at his beck
and call and too many grudges for his own good. often his goal is to take over
the whole world or annihilate it.
b)
The Government Guy or a group of government guys
who are the picture of honor to the outside world but are busy brewing
conspiracy, assassination or extortion cocktails. He could also be so high up
in the government that he is not even bothering to cover up his tracks anymore
and someone’s got to stop him.
c)
The Star – okay he’s the bad guy (evil) but we
can totally understand why he’s doing everything he can and our loyalty is
split between the villain and the hero.
d)
The Femme Fatale with a body like Madonna, a
brain like Einstein and a heart of evil making men susceptible to her before
she traps them in her web. Even the hero is a little bit enthralled by this siren.
e)
Double Agent – his playing both sides and has
connections with the mob, the cops, the government and everyone that has a
phone. And still no one has figured out who he is.
The Hero
a)
Ex-government guy who despite all the crap he’s
gone through with the government is still patriotic to the bone. He or she is a
loner with unsolved past issues. He may be forced to solve the crime with a
team of people he doesn’t like or has no intention of working with.
b)
Mistaken identity by the villain has forced the hero
into hide and seek mode.
The Plot
a)
Conspiracy
– the initial crime can be incongruous, insignificant or high profile. It
quickly degenerates into something much bigger than the protagonist thought it
was and everyone is involved. The conspiracy can be intellectual, political,
economical, religious, ethnic or alien.
b)
Psychological
– the character cannot rely on physical strength or gadgets to beat the enemy
but rather on using their brains. It involves a lot of mind games. Often the
villain is extremely kooky. There may be a few hushed phone-calls, secret
notes, find a clue at this time or someone’s going to get killed.
c)
Spy
Fiction – there’s a professional spy or a not so professional one. There’s
glamour, cool gadgets, blood and danger.
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